Don't give me that look

I know I know I haven't been posting and I'm really sorry! I wish I could say it's because I've been working on my manuscript but I can't. Apparently pulling your grades up in school takes time, about as much time as writing my entry. My deadline is in eleven days and I'm no where near done. I have however been working on a few short stories and poems. all of which you can see at my page at Teenink. My latest one isn't up yet because It's pending approvial but what ever it'll be up soon. I'd love some feed back because I've been experimenting with this first person and hyphens in my writing kinda like Edgar Allen Poe did a lot (We were studying him in English and I really like his style)